Why is there an Authors Advice section thing?

Wolf — Sun, 17 Aug 2008 07:04:53 GMT

No one uses it. Are there not authors out there. I hope that one day an author will put up something so we can benefit from it. I shall keep a very close eye upon that particular forum. IF YOU ARE AN AUTHOR PLEASE USE THE RESOURCES AVAILABLE TO YOU TO INSPIRE AND HELP THOSE IN WHOSE HANDS THE WRITING FUTURE RESTS!!!

The UBERLANE

The Poisonous Foogle Fish — Thu, 14 Aug 2008 14:40:36 GMT

I wonder...........

Have you hugged your fish pig today?

The Poisonous Foogle Fish — Tue, 29 Jul 2008 15:31:21 GMT

Well have you?

Introducing.... Lori!!

Lori — Thu, 10 Apr 2008 13:09:29 GMT

okay my name is Lori Franklin, but just about any kind of name that comes to mind is fine with me. i love to listen to music and watch movies (our DVD collection is now to big for our cupboard, believe me we have LOTS of movies). i like to hang out with my friends and just chill. i love comedy they are the best kind of movies. anything that makes you laugh is okay with me. i also like a bit of scary horror. i love to be spooked, grossed or creeped out!! i dont mind a chick flick every once in ...

The falling leaf

chocolatelover — Sat, 26 Jul 2008 09:17:41 GMT

In the middle of the forest a tall tree stood higher than any other. A single leaf started to fall from the tip of the tallest branch. A few stopped to watch it in the wind... It twisted and turned as it made it's way to the floor of the forest. Most would say it wasn't anything special, but little did they know that the moment this leaf touched the ground...

G'day, im Jo

Wolf — Tue, 01 Jul 2008 13:32:13 GMT

Hi, this is Jo speaking. I am 11, I live out in the middle of nowhere. Edi. I like horses dogs cattle and such things that country kids normally do like.

That's me.

See ya

A very short story

aloneandfree_alien — Tue, 01 Jul 2008 09:21:33 GMT

The inspiration for this was my own competition, the one with a non-human character as the main point of view. I couldn't enter it though, so I left it floating around my computer for a while before decided to post it. This is about the sea, but I've personificated it like mad. It's different to what I usually do - way more descriptive. I like the sea, by the way...

Enjoy!

She is stormy tonight, crashing down upon innocent travellers and frequent visitors alike, pounding the sandy ...

Do You Believe In... A few questions by Dragon

Red Dragon — Sun, 20 Jul 2008 06:57:23 GMT

"WHAT DO YOU BELIEVE IS TRUE EVEN THOUGH YOU CANNOT PROVE IT?"

I have a few questions for all of you.

Here they are.

- Do you believe in Dragons?

Dragon Footage

- Do you believe in Ghosts?

Ghost Footage

- Do you believe in the Loch Ness Monster?

Loch Ness Monster Footage

- Do you believe in Bigfoot?

Bigfoot Footage

- Do you believe in Aliens?

Alien Footage

Here are a few diffrent questions.

- Do you believe everything happens for a reason?

- ...

Hi! I'm me lol

El — Tue, 22 Apr 2008 01:46:35 GMT

Hey! I'm El! I'm mostly a song writer and fictionalist [is that actually a word?] but I'm working on a non-fiction, too.

I'm looking forward to posting stuff and reading your stuff, too.

Bye

Stories from Wang West

Lori — Sun, 16 Mar 2008 23:55:38 GMT

these are some stories from the grade threes Rachel and i have collected on Wednesdays. the kids have to remain anonymouse because of legal stuff. ENJOY!

1. They tried to open the trunk to find their grandmothers missing earrings. But they couldn�t lift the lid. Then a big black bear started to growl at them and they were very scared. After that they went. They found a little box at the door. Inside the box were their grandmother�s earrings. Then a big fat bus came by. Off the bus came their ...

Me, myself and I - Amanda.

Amanda — Tue, 22 Apr 2008 07:27:11 GMT

Hi! I'm Amanda. I am in year 7 this year and I enjoy reading all sorts of different books. I have lots of different favourite authors, but one of my favourites is Tamora Pierce. I LOVE her books. I don't know what else to say, so yeah...

Kalie rebelllious (if you reply please include something else for me to call it)

Wolf — Mon, 16 Jun 2008 11:22:08 GMT

Kalie glanced around at the gloomy forest. Not quite a spirit raiser. Kalie bent down and picked a large mushroom nestled beside a rotting log and a clump of dewy grass. "Pretty big one", Kalie said to herself, and continued "Probably should be glad that we have even this for tea tonight". Still she couldn't get past her dislike of the fungus that most families relied on in hard times. Kalie nearly gagged at even just the thought of eating the umbrella like object she held in her hand.

The ...

How to say goodnight at the end

El — Thu, 03 Jul 2008 06:55:04 GMT

One of the more recent songs in my vast collection, this is a little different than usual, but I hope you like it!!!

HOW TO SAY GOODNIGHT AT THE END

Close your eyes

Turn out the Light

Lay all your Fears To Rest

And I guess this where we say our Goodbyes

My friends [I said]

I guess this is how to say Goodnight At The End

This is How to say Goodnight

At the End, oh the End

Knew we�d have to say Goodbye

One Day my friend

So now will you Run with me

Come follow ...

Depression Expression

[[megapotamus]] — Sat, 03 May 2008 05:49:54 GMT

okay i am expresssing myself becoz i am depressed!!!!!!!!!!!!

the reason i am depressed is becoz i have read too many depressing books and/or seen to many depressing shows!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

1. Robin Hood

How many of you watch this show?? (no not the one with the foxes the TV series??) if you watch this show u will know that the season final was on the other night and SIR GUY KILLED MAID MARIAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was soo depressing ...

Red Dragon Signing In...

Red Dragon — Sat, 05 Jul 2008 07:37:46 GMT

Dragon here, I would just like to thank "Grim" for telling me about this site. You may know me as "Grim's" accomplice or partner in crime as I liked to be called. Many of you probably don't know me which is a great thing for me as I like to remain a mystery.

You have probably seen me around and I have said "Hi" to you but you do not know me. I know many of you out there so you can't hide from me.

Here are some names you can call me around here.

Dragon ...

SUP MA HOMIES!!! THIS IS ANDIE/BENDER/BEC/etc...

Bender — Sat, 05 Jul 2008 06:05:24 GMT

sup ma peoples wuts hagnen i'm just chillin here doing nuthin so i figured i'd give you all a buzz into ma life. ok its not really that interesting so i wouldn't worry about typing it but i can give you an insighgt to my abomintaion of a mind...mwahaha-a

as you step into a cobwebbed area you smell the feint smell of gunpowder? immendentily you wish you could turn back but the entrance is blocked by a strange smokey figure. you decide it's best just to leave him alone, he looks a bit dangerous. ...

Tell Us What You Think Of The Site?

lucky dice — Tue, 15 Apr 2008 10:52:48 GMT

This site is going great so here is a poll to see what everyone thinks of the site. You can leave a comment bellow or just vote in the poll.

Favourite Things?

aloneandfree_alien — Tue, 29 Jul 2008 11:17:29 GMT

In response to Kim's 'Pet Hates' topic, I have a Favourite things topic. Once you've finished ranting about things you hate, you can calm down and talk about things you love.

What is your absolute favourite thing/s (not people) in the whole world? You can say as many as you want.

I can only think of a few for now:

~ Going to the beach. Everything about it makes me feel peaceful and happy. The colour of the water, the sound of the waves, actually going IN the water, running about ...

TRINIE!!!

Trinie — Tue, 08 Apr 2008 09:05:07 GMT

Ok everyone, my names Katrina, but i prefer Trinaor slight abbreviation's.

I love the TV show Red Dwarf and have just watched and fell in love with Sweeny Todd (I know i know a weird movie to love but meh). I also like the scary movies, Epic Movie and Meet the Spartons. I like comedy more then serious but i don't mind chick flicks I like to hang around with my group of friends, but most of them are at the CLC. I really enjoy english but struggle with math. I hate....HATE death metal or screamy ...

just bored

badlydrawnlife — Wed, 06 Aug 2008 07:32:48 GMT

Drawn while bored & waiting for my nxt class @ Tafe.

I dunno...

The Poisonous Foogle Fish — Sun, 08 Jun 2008 15:52:23 GMT

I dunno if I like this or not. What do you all think? It's taken on Mt Buffalo, overlooking Mt Feathertop.

The life storie of thebillsackatorium (well the depressing part)

thebillsackatorium — Wed, 25 Jun 2008 13:00:00 GMT

Expressing my feelings.

Is something i do when no-one is around.

Through my poems of heartbrake and sorrow.

I give nothing but depresssive tales.

There has been times where i could write of happiness.

But those days have gone to nothing.

My poems are puzzles peices.

Put them together and you will find my heart.

It has been twisted, torn, punchered and slashed.

My depressive life is no more than a boring tale.

Clouds of grey shadow me as i walk.

Trees fade ...

THE AMAZING MACHINE

Mini — Thu, 28 Feb 2008 08:15:31 GMT

The Amazing Machine

By Eloise Lane, aged 8.

Once, there lived this most beautiful princess, Princess Nimbin, her parents the King and Queen and their maid, Mary. One day the King was working on his latest invention: the Craver 2000. What it did was: whatever creature you wanted to be, you would be!

�What a great invention!� thought the King when the Craver 2000 was finished. When the Craver 2000 was finished, he tested it on the royal dog, Fifi. Fifi turned into a human but she wasn�t ...

Drawn in '99

badlydrawnlife — Wed, 06 Aug 2008 08:37:12 GMT

This is 1 i found that i drew in '99.

the road to nowhere leads to.....

badlydrawnlife — Wed, 06 Aug 2008 07:44:24 GMT

I drew this around Easter time.

Riot - Billy Crimmin

billycrimmin — Thu, 14 Feb 2008 07:58:06 GMT

RIOT

A short story from early year 8

There was a whooshing noise and a sickening crunch following by a whistling noise and the sound of metal cracking against the bone of a mans scalp. Artis retracted the long steel peg and retrieved his fragmented brick, wiping the bloody peg on the vest of the man he had just killed. The man was wearing a tan uniform and had a red patch on his shoulder with a swastika stitched onto it. Artis checked the guard�s belt for weapons finding naught ...

Ulitimate Lateral Thinking!!

[[megapotamus]] — Sat, 31 May 2008 05:37:44 GMT

Here we go everyone!!!

I'm back with more ulitimate riddles!!!!!!

1. A police man was walking past a resturant when he heard "No John! Not the gun!" followed by a gunshot. He rushed into the resturant to see a lawyer, a chef and a dead man on the floor with a gun next to his body. The policeman went up to the lawyer and arrested him for murder.

None of them were wearing nametags. None of them had spoken.

How did he know?

2. Bob had just brought a new car.

He was so excited ...

Heavens' Lair

El — Thu, 03 Jul 2008 06:59:21 GMT

I'm not even sure why I pulled this from my 'Blue Files,' nor am I actually sure this is poetry, but I hope you enjoy it!!!

HEAVENS' LAIR [LOVE AND WAR]

It�s been a long, long time since we went behind enemy lines,

You almost forget you�ve been there.

It�s been such a long, long time you�ve forgotten

All those days spent days spent dying,

All those nights spent crying,

All those wounds to the mind and soul,

An open hole for the world.

And you�ve been there, so far from ...

Pet Hates???

**kim** — Tue, 29 Jul 2008 05:48:26 GMT

lol just wondering what annoys everyone for future reference.... nah, just kidding....

ok. i'll start off. what do i hate?

BULLIES!!!!!

they annoy me so much by teasing everyone and thinking they're so good. GRRRRRRRR!!

and then some of them are spoilt little brats who think that they rule the roost. GRRRR AGAIN!!!!

so what do you guys hate?

Bringing you down

Pebbles — Mon, 19 May 2008 11:30:10 GMT

Have you ever felt as is if your trapped in thee dark

and everyone is pushing you to take that mark

but you fall and hit the ground

and you feel as if your letting everyone down

you sink back inside yourself

and you wish you were an elf

and could just run away

and leave all of your troubles behind

But you can't

They grab your legs

and pull you back down to the ground

It's like surfing

You get on a good wave everything s right

your perfectly balanced nothing can ...

Ice cream By Jeremy Piper

5550147 — Tue, 06 May 2008 01:42:47 GMT

ICE CREAM

I knew in my mind something big,

Was going on around me,

Yet I pay no attention.

The rugged and beautiful scenery,

Was nothing compared to what happened next,

My mind was fixed on what my father was holding,

A pearly white ice cream.

It looked like the world to me,

Yet every bite I had would,

Eventually end up on dads,

New marsh green jacket that kept,

Me warm form the cold and harsh breeze of the mountain.

darkness comes.....

beentheredonethat — Sun, 27 Jul 2008 12:26:42 GMT

Holy men tell us life is a mystery.

They embrace that concept happily.

But some mysteries bite and bark

and come to get you in the dark.

A rain of shadows, a storm, a squall!!

Daylight retreats, night swallows all

If good is bright, if evil is gloom

high evil walls the world entombs.

now comes the end, the drear, darkfall

Darkness devours every shining day

Darkness demands and always has it's way

Darkness listens, watches, waits

Darkness claims the day and ...

Forever lost

sunset — Thu, 08 May 2008 09:38:39 GMT

Hi. This is a poem I have to write for school.

Please leave comments.

GONE...

I wish she was still here,

That was my first thought,

I wish she had never gone.

Its strange the way you can cry

Over someone you�ve lost,

But never knew.

The way you miss them when their gone,

Although you�ve never met,

And you would cry all night for them,

As if you where best friends.

At first I couldn�t believe it,

It just didn�t seem real,

But as time went on,

The feeling of ...

Weekly Competition 15 - Ends 28th of July

aloneandfree_alien — Mon, 21 Jul 2008 10:07:19 GMT

This competition can be any genre you want with 500 or less words.

However

You must start the story with this sentence:

"I knew even before I heard their pounding footsteps that they were following me."

From that point onwards, you can continue it however you want. The starting sentence isn't included in the word count.

That's about it, so get started!

Rosie.

the quest of the GRIM writers identity

Grim Writer — Thu, 26 Jun 2008 10:01:44 GMT

My identity shows as GRIM but my real identity is only known by a few.

No matter what i say th only thing that will aid your search is to read my future posts.

i shall leave hints and clues to my real identity.

And that is all you shall find out about the one and only GRIM

The sea rising???

sunset — Fri, 16 May 2008 10:47:49 GMT

i have a question.

If you don't understand it, just say and i'll try to explain it better. well, here it goes.

You know how everyone says if the artic and the antarctic mellted that the sea level would rise. (If you don't know, too bad.)

well, considering that ice burgs are 9/10 under water, and water expands when it is frozen, wouldn't the sea level go down?

I think.....

The Poisonous Foogle Fish — Tue, 29 Jul 2008 12:36:28 GMT

I think everyone should be nice to me. All the moderators are picking on me.

My wife once carried out a systematic campaign of protest and non-compliance against the Census Bureau. NOW THAT is a ranting topic.....

hello everyone.........

beentheredonethat — Wed, 23 Jul 2008 17:12:55 GMT

just wanted to say hello to everyone ..i will be posting some stuff later and i hope anyone who reads it likes it..

i gotta say some is from mt teenage yrs so a bit dark but they do get lighter i promise lol...

ENJOY

p.s thanx to all have welcomed me

peace

xx

the cat in the ally

qwerty14 — Sun, 20 Apr 2008 05:04:53 GMT

it was a dark and gloomly night the was no one around, just the cat on the door step of the 5th apartmewnt on 33rd street. It was always there at the same time every friday night to get the owners leftover fish and chips. It would carry the food down stairs and place in the middle of the ally and sit and wait on top of the round silver trash can for the pigons to come and then.....

Forbidden Otter and travdog- The Way You Are (Perfect)

Forbidden Otter — Thu, 03 Jul 2008 08:22:06 GMT

Trav was over the other day, so I pulled out my acoustic guitar, messed around with it for a bit and found this awesome guitar riff! Then we thought to ourselves, "This song needs lyrics! But what should we right them about?..." and then it hit us! We wrote the song as one but we both wrote it for a different person! (You can probably guess who I wrote it about!) I'm not sure if it's any good, but I'll let you guys decide! Enjoy!

The Way You Are (Perfect)

Intro

Every morning ...

He needs a name!

Vampire! — Tue, 22 Jul 2008 10:50:43 GMT

Ok, I'm writing a story. It's posted in the VIP novels as "An untitled work in progress." It only has two chapters posted at the moment but one of my main characters doesn't have a name.

The story is a kinda teen-romancy and I've been referring to my un-named character as him. Which wont work because he is the love interest in the story. All the other characters have names and I'm going crazy trying to find a name for this one character.

I don't want any strange, outlandish ...

Reminder to all members

aloneandfree_alien — Thu, 24 Jul 2008 10:32:45 GMT

To ALL members, just a friendly reminder that you can't have more than one account on this site. There are a few people we know have two or more accounts on here. Don't think we won't find out...we can use our supreme powers (and I can use my Jedi mind tricks).

If you have a reason for or a need to having more than one account, just speak to one of the admins and we'll sort it out.

Thanks,

aloneandfree_alien AKA Rosie

On behalf of the NE Writer's Forum Staff

Uh...Me...I guess...

Vampire! — Tue, 22 Apr 2008 11:26:41 GMT

Hey.

My English teacher told my whole class to sign up to this site so I did.

Not that I have any objections to signing up. I think this site is great.

I suppose I should introduce myself properly. My name is Elli, and, like most people on this site I go to Wang High. I'm in year 8 and am signing up to this site as part of my Writing For Extensions class.

I love writing, but haven't been at it long. I only discovered my love for writing towards the end of last year.

If ...

weekly comp 14. ends whenever i get the time to judge it.

thebillsackatorium — Tue, 24 Jun 2008 10:39:47 GMT

ok here goes for my first attempt

i would like a undead mythological type story

500 words or less (but no less than lets say 150 words)

and the winner shall get my praise as a mythological undead writer type person

good luck to all participants if there are any

Purple is the world Purple!

rob0027 — Wed, 25 Jun 2008 02:20:42 GMT

Purple walls, ceiling, bed, clothes, light and computer. It�s everywhere it�s the only colour I see. Everywhere I go outside inside light darkness it�s all purple. Birds, bugs, people and animals are the same colour I can�t control it. My brain only picks up the colour purple. Books, paper, and font it�s all purple. It occasionally drives me up the wall. Mum and Dad say that the doctors don�t ...

ranting about whaleing

Wolf — Sat, 05 Jul 2008 14:44:33 GMT

OK then. I shall think about all the things that annoy me. The first that I think of i will rant about. Whaling. WHY???? I mean whales are endangered. The Japanese and other countries just dont get it that if they hunt them too much then they will die. Whales aren't vicious, mean and ferocious creatures. Giants nonetheless, but relatively gentle giants, to humans anyway. I don't think that krill think the same way about whales that i do. But why. They say that they are doing scientific research. ...

how can i create my on banner ADS!

*tupakin — Sat, 12 Jul 2008 15:30:34 GMT

Good pm to all!

help me i want to know how can i add banner ads to my sites? here is mine website http://tupakin.darkbb.com kindly give me a guideline or step by step solution please pr visit my site for your comment

Silent (As You Wanted)

aloneandfree_alien — Sat, 14 Jun 2008 04:19:56 GMT

Written about a former friend...

I can�t talk to you anymore,

Not when you�re like this.

I can�t bring myself to speak to you,

But my presence you won�t miss.

While you�re busy ignoring me,

I�m trying to be seen.

While you�re pretending to value me,

I�m just living in a dream.

You�ve got better friends than me,

And haven�t you made it clear.

I, who trusted you completely,

Am nothing you hold dear.

Our relationship is frayed now,

I�ve just been thrown away

For ...

Chance of a Lifetime

aloneandfree_alien — Sat, 28 Jun 2008 13:58:31 GMT

This one works if you picture the chance that would give you YOUR big break in life. Thinking of it? You can make it up if you want, the poem will still work just as well.

Now read the poem while thinking about that one chance...and think, which scenario that is given would be the hardest? (Or easiest) Hopefully this one makes you think a bit...or just provides some insight into the crazy way I think...

If you had the heart,

Would you take it?

Would you throw caution to the ...

the billsackatorium is back and has new material oh yeah

thebillsackatorium — Tue, 24 Jun 2008 10:22:27 GMT

if there was a moment

a single moment of joy

would you take it

as i would take thay moment and cherish it

but there is an empty space in that moment

the space that needs you to make it perfect

then i could take it and hold it forever

maybe there was a moment for us to be but that moment

that single moment has not yet appered

you smile has been melted into my mind

my heart torn out and givin to you

you wander by without a word and all i can do is watch you

there ...